Slumber Blooms at Night

A fresh scent, a beautiful love

 

 

Slumber Blooms at Night

by jack 

 

O’ Fragrance of Magnolia

Magnificent a sight

Lying on your bed stand

Slumber Blooms at night

Aromas fill the room

Fresh scent fills the air

Sweet bouquet Magnolia

Throughout your golden hair

Beauty prompted scents

As fine as any made

Filtered by the smile you wear

Resting in the shade

I gently kneel beside you

Observing you at rest

Knowing true my love for you

Will more than stand the test

Your hand I hold so tender

Each finger within mine

Caressing softly, lovingly

Losing track of time

This vision you my angel

The love I’ve waited for

I’ll stay till you awaken

And love even more

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Zahra]

beautifully romantic. I don't know what else to say. Loved it.

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much.

["writing by" KS]

Oh oh oh Jack. What can I say.. hmmmm ermmmm... wow !
Perfection. I loved it. I shall be putting this in my library. Thank you :)

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much. Your comments have made my evening

["writing by" KS]

You're welcome Jack. Your beautiful poem made mine :)

[KAOlmsted]

O' I know when it starts with O' it's going to be a good one! And this is. Simply beautiful...you really are trying to convert me ;-) I may become a true believer in the romantic poem, Jack...

[Jack...]

You can't blame a guy for trying. Thanks so much Kimmer.

[KAOlmsted]

My pleasure ;-)

[Angel of Heart's]

This is exactly what I needed to breathe into my soul tonight......a mesmerising journey of beautiful tranquility that serenades the heart so softly......... heart-prints deep and moving..... transcendental writing dear Jack :)

[Jack...]

Your comments have brightened my day. Thank you so much.

[InsanityWriter]

Simply beautiful. :) It flowed perfectly and was perfecly composed-- it sounded like a song. :) Wonderfully written. (:

[Jack...]

Thanks again. Happy you enjoyed it.

[Frieda P]

*sigh*...I need to get some magnolia's for my nightstand for sure. Watching a loved one sleep is that 'special' kind of love that comes from deep within the heart, as does your poetry. Always a treat to read you Jack.

[Jack...]

Thank you so much dear Frieda.

[Kenilo Kent]

More than ever do I long for some strange magic spells to enchant this enchanting flora into a maiden fairest and together melt away forever..

[Jack...]

Thank you so much

[PoeticVandal]

Wow, I'm speechless

[Jack...]

Thank you so much

[AYVID N]

As I read this, fragrant darkness enveloped me. Watching a sleeping beloved as lovely as those flowers, must have been an awesome experience. And it was totally brought to picture for the reader here. Thanks Jack, for sharing it.

[Jack...]

Divya, once again your sweet words have brightened my day

[Blue Ivory]

It's beautiful!

[Jack...]

Thank you so much

[Blue Ivory]

You deserve praise. Your writing style is remarkable :)

[Jack...]

Thank you again.