Snow like a whisper

Whispers of white fall on my heart

 

 

Snow like a Whisper

by jack

 

Snow like a whisper does fall from the sky

Silently finding its way

Morning shall come in the blink of an eye

Nature to beckon the day

 

White fills the quiet with hope of a smile

Melodies that you might hear

Blanketing softy in porcelain style

A glow born of sun does appear

 

Stillness shall flourish in peace at this hour

Cold it will harness the reins

Glorious partners to stay but a while

Here on this earth to reclaim

 

Tranquil endeavors to quell every whim

Lie on the lawn in repose

Forgotten meanings that now shall begin

Found each occasion it snows

 

Gentle its echo as we find retreat

Here by the warmth of the fire

No use descending on snow covered streets

Only our love is required

 

Unruffled seasons of splendor do shine

Muted the colors they bear

Normal these visions of our wintertime

Life without worry or care

 

Slower the pace of this plaid flannel world

Hectic the days of ago

Restful this morning to us has unfurled

Taking each step a bit slow

 

Nothing to urgent that now can not wait

Serenity finds to take hold

The heat of the fire we two do migrate

So warm inside when it’s cold

 

Pearlescent shimmering visions this day

Resting here safe in your love

Oh but to spend my life living this way

Bring forth the snow from above

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[KAOlmsted]

You make the presence of snow sound like heaven on earth when we all know it is an incarnation of the devil ;-) Beautifully done, as usual.

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Kimmer.

[KAOlmsted]

Absolutely...

[Leigh]

Your descriptions of nature and the world around you are so detailed, soft and caring.You have created a beautiful winter scene for the mind to fall into and in that scene for some reason I find myself in a log cabin with snow on the roof, sat by the fire writing poetry.

[Jack...]

Then I am pleased with what you have taken from my work. Thank you so much for your always wonderful comments on my work.

[Leigh]

This one is Inspirational and quite an experience, I was trying to write something like this myself, it's going in the library

[InsanityWriter]

So beautiful, lyrical, and flowing. ^_^ Excellent piece. You captured the esscence of snow perfectly. *adds to favorites* ;)

100/100

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much. This was a sweet surprise this morning.

[durrya]

I feel quiet, peace, serene, and glory inside it.
beautiful poem.

[Jack...]

You sweet words have made my day. thank you so much

[durrya]

you are welcome.

[Angel of Heart's]

White fills the quiet with hope of a smile
Melodies that you might hear
Blanketing softy in porcelain style
A glow born of sun does appear

Stillness shall flourish in peace at this hour
Cold it will harness the reins
Glorious partners to stay but a while
Here on this earth to reclaim

Tranquil endeavors to quell every whim
Lie on the lawn in repose
Forgotten meanings that now shall begin
Found each occasion it snows....

The entire spill is a poetic masterpiece, but the verses I quoted just stopped me in my tracks and beckoned me to travel through the entire write again..... Loved it Jack :)

[Jack...]

Your kind words are the reason I write. Thank you so much dear Angel.

[uzair zahid]

nice poem... And it is snowing here this time...:)

[Jack...]

Thanks so much

[Nick.B]

Good poem describing the feel of winter, cold and snow...great job

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Nick.

[JS Easler]

Honestly, I'm not one for happy and peaceful poems, that's just me. However, I find this one to be a great one. I love how you use your vocabulary here, and the metaphors too. Keep writing :D

[Jack...]

Thanks, I appreciate it.

[Salar Majak]

beautiful!! this is a really beautiful poem! it describes the scene perfectly, beautifuly!!! love it!

[Jack...]

Thank you so much

[Salar Majak]

:)

[quinfinn]

as breathtaking and gorgeous and pristine as a freshly fallen winter-scape...this one is one of your best ever. well done!

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much for your sweet words. They are greatly appreciated.