O’er echoes of this destined night

A lonely lover stands on a beach wishing

 

O’er echoes of this destined night

By jack

 

To thee, my sweet and tender jewel, oh all that I shall ever need

Within my heart a calling finds the windswept dreams of open sea

Of every tide to wash ashore as steady in a fluent pace

I stand, my footprints in the sand of every move that I may make

 

To feel the rush of silent wind a’ gusting round my every pore

So calm my soul doth call to thee to be my true and every more

For I shall be but half a man without your wondrous sequined touch

A’ glisten on a moon beam dance I’ve come to find I want so much

 

I listen as the crested waves do fall before my weary eyes

O’er endless the horizon cuts a path across these charcoal skies

To pray, my hand now cups this love, so offered, you do send my way

Now held so high before this night a’ glowing of this grand display

 

I bear my soul to only thee, in promises I hold so true

An open book of turning page eternal finds my desperate view

Until the light of morning comes to rise in vibrant colors bright

I stand before, and shout your name o’er echoes of this destined night

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[being me]

For I shall be but half a man without your wondrous sequined touch -...romantic pure ...i love the way you express yourself..as if you act it out as in a play with the audience breath taken and waiting

[Jack...]

Wow, thank you so ever much for your kind and flattering words.

[being me]

not flattering

[Jack...]

Not?

[being me]

oops sorry i mean i wasn't just flattering you for truth needs no flatterers

[Angel of Heart's]

You are such an amazing artist of words, and this one stirs the soul, and wraps around the canvas of the heart in colours that transform into rainbows of beauty.....
Gorgeous, gorgeous write dear Jack ....

[Jack...]

I shall forever be grateful to your kind words.

[Rufus "Mr Blaque" Lacy,..]

You have some of the most captivating images before I read the poem, then I read the words you inscribe. Creating a wonderful unity of discovery, thank you.

[Jack...]

Thank you kind sir.

[Holly Mason]

these words form such a lovely piece of word art!
yes it is a grand display may their wish come true
thank you for sharing

[Jack...]

Thanks so much. I am happy you enjoyed it.

[Frieda P]

This is like a lover's lullaby. Like the ocean's waves it lulls my heart to a wondrous place of the sweetness that is love and longing. Quite beautiful sentiments.

[Jack...]

Thanks Beautiful, your comments are always the highlight of my day.

[AYVID N]

I truly enjoyed reading this. The poetry just flows and fills the reader with the most awesome pictures of love and a beautiful midnight.

Loved the "wondrous sequined touch" - great. Speaks so well of a man in true love.

Thanks for sharing this lovely poem.

[Jack...]

Thank you so much for reading and sharing your thoughts with me.

[VALORMORE DE PLUME]

Dark humor once befriended.
Artistic licence, defended.
Move towards light, intended.
Your work has now ascended.
You know? I think it's splendid.

[Jack...]

Hey Valormore, nice to see you. How goes it? Thanks so much for the comments.

[Carolann Dowsett]

So beautiful, full of love and desire, a wistful yearning for a distant love.

[Jack...]

Thank you Carolann, so happy you found this.

[Emerald Seas]

Gorgeous! If that can be an adequate descriptor for a poem, it shall go to this writing. Did it again Jack.

[Jack...]

Thank you so much...Que. can I call you Que?

[Emerald Seas]

You're welcome! Sure, although there is a "Que" on WC (I think may be a guy, not sure) - the "Sera" is actually much closer to my real name which is partly why I picked the phrase :)

[Jack...]

Ok then, Sera it is. Thank you so much dear Sera

[Emerald Seas]

You're welcome! :)

[durrya]

this is so beautiful!
i am touched. thanks for the share.

[Jack...]

Thank you so much for your kind comments

[durrya]

you are welcome.