Angel of love

Save me

 

 

Angel of love

By jack

 

Drowning in happiness

Swimming of life

Tasting the fruit of the sum

 

Tempting the visions

I look to the light

Seeking the hand of the one

 

Head above water

My strength all but spent

Searching for answers so true

 

Thoughts of the future

O’er tides they are sent

Here in this valley of blue

 

Dreams of the fever

As heat tends to rise

Lost on an eternal wave

 

Riding the reasons

Of yesterday’s skies

Once I was lost now I’m saved

 

Sand like a blanket

With warmth for to share

Thanking the heavens above

 

I open my eyes

And I find you are there

Oh my sweet angel of love

 

 

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Brittany Zedalis]

This is very lovely. I like the rhyming.

[Jack...]

Thank you Brittany. This is an older piece of mine. Happy you enjoyed it.

[Giggling Star]

This is absolutely wonderful. And the pic is so perfect for it. Congrats!

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much my friend. Thrilled you enjoyed this.

[s y e]

// Thoughts of the future
O’er tides they are sent
Here in this valley of blue //

The title, this stanza, all the other stanza's - love them! My friend, this is complete beauty! I am blown away at how perfect and stunning this one is. I loved it so, so much. I've read it three times to myself, twice out loud and once to my Gran who also loved it. :)

[Jack...]

My sweet friend and poetry promoter, thank you so much for all of the kindness you show to me. my heart sings in the key of Sye.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

You are so great. I always love to read your works. :)

[Jack...]

Thank you so much. I appreciate the kind words. Hopefully I can continue to keep you as a fan.