Angel of love

Angel of love

A Poem by Jack...
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Save me

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Angel of love

By jack

 

Drowning in happiness

Swimming of life

Tasting the fruit of the sum

 

Tempting the visions

I look to the light

Seeking the hand of the one

 

Head above water

My strength all but spent

Searching for answers so true

 

Thoughts of the future

O’er tides they are sent

Here in this valley of blue

 

Dreams of the fever

As heat tends to rise

Lost on an eternal wave

 

Riding the reasons

Of yesterday’s skies

Once I was lost now I’m saved

 

Sand like a blanket

With warmth for to share

Thanking the heavens above

 

I open my eyes

And I find you are there

Oh my sweet angel of love

 

 

 

© 2013 Jack...


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This is very lovely. I like the rhyming.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jack...

10 Years Ago

Thank you Brittany. This is an older piece of mine. Happy you enjoyed it.
This is absolutely wonderful. And the pic is so perfect for it. Congrats!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jack...

10 Years Ago

Thank you so very much my friend. Thrilled you enjoyed this.
// Thoughts of the future
O’er tides they are sent
Here in this valley of blue //

The title, this stanza, all the other stanza's - love them! My friend, this is complete beauty! I am blown away at how perfect and stunning this one is. I loved it so, so much. I've read it three times to myself, twice out loud and once to my Gran who also loved it. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jack...

10 Years Ago

My sweet friend and poetry promoter, thank you so much for all of the kindness you show to me. my he.. read more
You are so great. I always love to read your works. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much. I appreciate the kind words. Hopefully I can continue to keep you as a fan.

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Added on February 18, 2013
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Jack...
Jack...

San Antonio, TX



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Not much to tell about me, I am just Jack, I am a poet, a writer, a musician, a painter, a builder and a dreamer. I live in south Texas but am originally from New Jersey and miss it more and more all .. more..

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