Angel of love

Save me

 

 

Angel of love

By jack

 

Drowning in happiness

Swimming of life

Tasting the fruit of the sum

 

Tempting the visions

I look to the light

Seeking the hand of the one

 

Head above water

My strength all but spent

Searching for answers so true

 

Thoughts of the future

O’er tides they are sent

Here in this valley of blue

 

Dreams of the fever

As heat tends to rise

Lost on an eternal wave

 

Riding the reasons

Of yesterday’s skies

Once I was lost now I’m saved

 

Sand like a blanket

With warmth for to share

Thanking the heavens above

 

I open my eyes

And I find you are there

Oh my sweet angel of love

 

 

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[child of God]

this is beautiful thank you for pending

[Michael G. Smith]

Beautiful and quite uplifting. I truly feel this way about the love I share with my wife.

[Jack...]

Thanks so very much.

[Angel]

I really like this one, Jack. Just simply sweet...

[Jack...]

Hmmm, I wonder why? :) Thanks so much my friend.

[Angel]

I dunno...it just feels kinda...personal...

[Night]

Well crafted....nice poem.

[Jack...]

Thanks so much my friend.

[Night]

You're very welcome...=)

[Sue Hart]

The picture is beautiful. The poem meaningful. "Head above water...strength all but spent. Searching for answers..." You're describing the world as much as a single relationship. Finding safety, reaching out, feeling loved at last.

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much Sue. I am happy you liked this poem. I do truly appreciate you visiting my world.

[Katherine R.]

This is really good, Jack! The rhyme was excellently done and the tone is......sheesh I lost my words again...I'll just settle with 'beautiful'! Love it, Jack! Great work!

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much katherine. This is an older piece of mine, but I'll never turn away beautiful reviews like this one. I really appreciate you spending so much time in my world.

[Katherine R.]

Typos...

Here's what I said: No problem! But you can thank Sye for finding it for me. The wonderful noodle sent me a read request.

[Jack...]

I know she did and I have already thanked her over and over again.

[Katherine R.]

She always recommends the best stuff. Sye has a good eye with poetry and the like.

[m.s.early]

Valentines day is just around the corner and you are certainly in bloom, Jack. Cheers!

[Jack...]

Thanks so much X. Glad you liked this.

[stars are far]

sweet happiness in love.... that was amazing....
i enjoyed the scene :)

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much for your sweet words.

[stars are far]

my pleasure

[Pryde Foltz]

Thoughts of the future
O’er tides they are sent
Here in this valley of blue

Dreams of the fever
As heat tends to rise
Lost on an eternal wave

Riding the reasons
Of yesterday’s skies
Once I was lost now I’m saved

Great piece, Jack. You accomplished something very unique and effective with its rhythm.

[Jack...]

Thank you my sweet friend. It is an great accomplishment for me whenever you stop by.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A piece Jack that has all the ingredients of a heartfelt prose and you strike at it, well done.

[Jack...]

Thanks so very much Thomas for always being so kind to me.