Once again, i've read out another great poem, but this time i've seen a rhyming style in your few/starting lines.....
Peaceful is the feeling
Of grasses morning glow
Dancing shadowed monuments
Soon to filter low...
& i loved it. well written.
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thank you so much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment. I always look forward to wh.. read moreThank you so much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment. I always look forward to what you think.
Mornings with fresh dew, I'll leave it up to you, how you translate my review. I think it's a wondrous wake up call, I dare say I loved it all. ;-)
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Faster than
a running cheetah
comes the rhymes
penned by Frieda
.. read moreFaster than
a running cheetah
comes the rhymes
penned by Frieda
Thanks dear.
11 Years Ago
Slammin' ;-)
11 Years Ago
It took me a while, but I knew something had to rhyme with Frieda.
11 Years Ago
Ha, I knew you would...you're the rhymer of the century. That's as far as my rhyming skills go....... read moreHa, I knew you would...you're the rhymer of the century. That's as far as my rhyming skills go..........
11 Years Ago
I've got one: Sometime/Someone/Somewhere will
Needa
Frieda
11 Years Ago
yes indeed Marie, I do not think my days would be the same without one.
11 Years Ago
hahahaha sounds like a chip....where's the dip? ;-P
You are quickly becoming my favorite poet. This is lovely! The painting is beautiful and elevates the vision for your poem, but the poetry itself moves me. Utterly breathtaking!!
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Dearest Quill, I am honored by your words. You have brought a smile to my face this morning. Thank y.. read moreDearest Quill, I am honored by your words. You have brought a smile to my face this morning. Thank you so much.
11 Years Ago
:) Thank you!
A valuable receiver you are, this was a beautiful short piece. I hope to read more of this series of yours. Thank you for sharing.
- Elisa
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thank you Dear Elisa, I will post them a little at a time. I am pleased you enjoyed this, I had fun .. read moreThank you Dear Elisa, I will post them a little at a time. I am pleased you enjoyed this, I had fun writing to his wonderful art.
Not much to tell about me, I am just Jack, I am a poet, a writer, a musician, a painter, a builder and a dreamer. I live in south Texas but am originally from New Jersey and miss it more and more all .. more..