Melancholy Melody

The muisc of a broken heart

Melancholy Melody

By jack

 

Music stands alone the thief
Below thy windowed heart
In melodies of sad belief
From in thy world depart

O’er the lost beneath a moon
Of memory formed light
A brisk wind lingers wayward tune
The sound you hear this night

A symphony O’ long goodbyes
The orchestra to play
Found as one this stanza’d cry
Doth cast thy love away

Music sings the sorrowed themes
O’ broken heart's bewildered dreams

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

O’er the lost beneath a moon
Of memory formed light
A brisk wind lingers wayward tune
The sound you hear this night

What a powerful words! I am bewitched with this wayward tune!

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much, I am happy it spoke to you.

[Frieda P]

Rejection and loss have never sounded so lovely. Not sure how you do it, but all your pieces have a unique melody all their own. Another precious read Jack.

[Jack...]

Thank you Frieda, your kind words are my fuel to keep writing.

[Morgane Soustre]

It was a great read, powerful, sweet and moving. Good job

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much for your kind words.

[Holly Mason]

poor broken heart....bewildered dreams
title fits the content and that photo is beautiful kind of adds to the melancholy
thank you for sharing

[Jack...]

Thanks Holly, I appreciate your comments and your friendship.

[J. J. Nightingale]

Notes fill the earthly skies
And we that grieve
Harmonize ...

Smooth .. With warm rhythmic beats .... Jasmine

[Jack...]

I am truly humbled, thank you so much for reading.

[J. J. Nightingale]

:).......................

[Distant horizons]

This has such a soulful sigh to each and every line. Absolutely love that last line Jack, superb.

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much, you are sweet to read it and comment.