Walking with me

Finding love walking beside you

Walking with me

By Jack Ivey

 

 

Touched by a rain drop that falls from the sky

Calling on nature to be

Sadness ensues in the blink of an eye

Something is following me

 

Lost in a valley with hills all a’ flow

Turning my body around

Dreaming of life that I someday will know

Silently waiting the sound

 

Cascading shadows of cool on the day

Shelter I come to adore

Magical moments so vast in display

Finding what’s waiting in store

 

Taking a path that shall bend on the turn

Corners collect in my smile

Hearing the footsteps I’ve come now to yearn

Tossing my cares in a pile

 

Since I have cried and the sun comes to shine

Drying my tears when they fall

Leaving the fortress to fade off with time

Counting each stone in the wall

 

Desperately seeking my dreams to come true

Off in the promises shown

Stealing a look and then finding it’s you

If I had only just known

 

Here all along you have waited my hand

Caught in the simplest touch

Fingers entwined are a part of the plan

Shouting I missed this so much

 

Now as I walk I have love by my side

Beauty in forms now to be

Facing the sun as I no longer hide

Since you are walking with me

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Debbie_Philly]

So very beautiful Jack..... love like that is one in a million these days... and Im a die hard fan... ;) Great piece !!

[Jack...]

Thanks Debbie. I appreciate you read ing my work.

[quinfinn]

the rhyme and meter in this are splendid and the words are a beautiful symphony. you are carving a niche in this genre which will be yours and yours alone. very nicely written and beautifully penned.

[Jack...]

Thanks so much for commenting

[David Scott]

It is always better to have a companion you love to walk beside you.
Jack, you have bright days ahead if this is your mindset.
A poem worth reading.

[Jack...]

Thanks, I appreciate it

[Emerald Seas]

Wonderful flow of thought and poetic form to this, Jack. A thoroughly enjoyable read.

[Jack...]

Thank you so much

[dawn aulis]

What fluid movement, in word and verse. It flows like a stream, trickling down, with rhythm, cascading along, with s soothing noise. Beautiful and very well done.

[Jack...]

Thank you so much Dawn

[Holly Mason]

this is beautiful...to me I imagine you are in love with your best friend and she finally figures it out...thank you for sharing

[Jack...]

Thank you for reading and leaving a wonderful comment. I am happy you enjoyed it.