Two Happy Flowers

A story of love in the garden

 

Two Happy Flowers

 

 

There is a happy flower

As proud as he can be

Living In a garden

Beneath the garden tree

Sunny skies of blue

What he loves to see

There is a happy flower

Growing wild and free

 

There is a happy flower

As cute as she can be

Living in a garden

Beneath the garden tree

Birds of every color

What she loves to see

There is a happy flower

Blooming beautifully

 

A funny thing did happen

Deep beneath the ground

In amongst the dirt and worms

Where darkness can be found

Roots began to travel

One set to the west

The other moving eastward

A very lengthy quest

Till one day it happened

The roots began to touch

They really loved the feeling

They loved it oh so much

These roots they grew connected

Locked together tight

Hoping that the other

Wishing that they might

Know the other's feelings

Soon become as one

Living life together

Underneath the sun

They’ll hold on for forever

Or till the end of time

Roots of his and roots of hers

Living intertwined

 

There are two happy flowers

Blooming Beautifully

In two different gardens

Beneath two different trees

Their roots to stay connected

Until eternity

Two happy little flowers

In love as they can be

 

 

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[s y e]

It was just before winter, I was gardening with my Gran, we were planting flowers and taking out this bush thing that was sitting there looking lame and sad...! So it took me 3 hours to dig and pull it out, my brother found this hilarious (so did everyone else) I was slaving away and when I turned around there they all were, eating and drinking..... tut tut.

Anyway, this is amazing Jack -- I loved this, it's so cute and colourful!!! I adored it!

[Jack...]

Well that's not fair.

Thank you so much.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

when love is this deep, it is going to last...when there are strong roots to a relationship...the bond is forever.

nicely done. beautiful allegory.

jacob

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Jacob. Just a little fun here.

[Baby Ricochet]

I like flowers...........................................

[Jack...]

Just not pansies I'm sure. Thank you sir.

[Dye]

This is such a sweet but thoughtful easy read. So romantic.

"Till one day it happened
The roots began to touch
They really loved the feeling
They loved it oh so much"

[Jack...]

Thanks Dye...just having a little fun and trying not to be so serious.

[Dye]

Well, I love fun, and hardly anything I write is serious. So it works for me :)

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

This is just lovely, Jack. There is little more for me to say. I felt as though I was reading a nursery rhyme, but I was also being shown the depths of human emotion at the same time. Sublime, clever, fun, beautiful....lovely!

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Sarah. Just having a little fun with easy rhymes.

[Lydia Shutter]

Gloriously romantic metaphor, Jack. Two flowers happy alone, but blissful together. The innocence was charismatic. So adorable. Lydi**

[Jack...]

Thanks so much my sweet friend. This one was written by the child in me... :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are rooted in romance Jack and always blooming in your imagination underneath the sun of truth...Very beautiful...:)

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Sami. I guess you never know what will bloom from my mind.

[Sami Khalil]

That is true...You are welcome...:)

[Frieda P]

Insanely delightful read my sweet friend, this is like a sigmile...a sigh and sweet smile combined. So adorably luverly! :-)

[Jack...]

Thanks so very much my sweet friend. Thrilled this brought some happiness to you.

[Dhaye]

Oh, this is so cute, Jack. Romantic flowers, huh! I love the unique concept...the metaphor of lovers.
I wish we are that two happy flowers...

Wonderful piece, Jack. I like cute and funny stuffs like this. Great job!

[Jack...]

Thank so much my friend. So nice to see your smile blooming in my world.

[Dhaye]

You're welcome. :)