Ahhh, you're definitely a romantic at heart, my sweet friend, there is no doubt about it. You blew me right to Texas with this one! :)> she is sure worth waiting for.
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Thank you so very much my friend. I always am thrilled to see your name appear on my screen and your.. read moreThank you so very much my friend. I always am thrilled to see your name appear on my screen and your sweet words waiting to make me smile.
Your description of the abandoned beau reaches into my heart. I can plainly visualize the pursed lips, unfocused eyes, elbows on knees posture, and a seeming eternity of no breath at all, followed by a long shuddering sigh...I would appreciate your having a look-see at my titles: "Weather Girl" and "Stairs" for different takes on similar emotions.
I believe you may have meant "quiet" instead of "quite" in the eighth stanza.
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Yes you are correct, I will edit that directly. Thanks
Not much to tell about me, I am just Jack, I am a poet, a writer, a musician, a painter, a builder and a dreamer. I live in south Texas but am originally from New Jersey and miss it more and more all .. more..