Memories Full of Tears

Come and greet the sadness which no heart should find

Memories full of tears

By Jack Ivey

 

In shadows deep I forage so

These places left for not

An image stands in faded glow

Amidst the broken lot

 

Along my face the scars they bear

Mere traces streaked of pain

A' touch my quaking lips they share

Forever to remain

 

A distant thought does grip my soul

In memories of fear

For silhouettes that shan't let go

I shed this lonely tear

Author's Note

Thank you for reading this

Reviews

[s y e]

Sometimes a good cry is all we need, I know that for sure. Beautifully written.

[Jack...]

Thank you so much my friend.

[KAOlmsted]

And thank you for sharing this. Sometimes we just need a good cry. Well done, this.

[Jack...]

Much appreciated, as always you comments brighten my day.

[KAOlmsted]

:-D My pleasure, Jack...and thank you!

[icelandicblue]

Simply beautiful Jack. Did anyone ever tell you you had a way with words lol?

[Jack...]

Not that i can remember...Thanks

[Frieda P]

Poured that tear right into my heart, bittersweet read to which I relate...

[Jack...]

Thanks Frieda, I appreciate it. Sometimes the sadness just needs to flow.

[Emerald Seas]

A loneliness captured in eloquent lines. Beautiful

[Jack...]

Thank you so much

[Carolann Dowsett]

To many lonely tears shed. Just beautiful Jack.

[Jack...]

Thank you carolann, your comments always thrill me.

[Carolann Dowsett]

Oh thank you thats wonderful.

[Tate Morgan]

This is by my opinion the best i have seen from you so far . I like short concise and to the point. And this delivers gloriously

[Jack...]

Thanks, I wrote this for a friend who had experienced a loss in her world.

[Sami Khalil]

In shadows deep I forage so

These places left for not

An image stands in faded glow

Amidst the broken lot.
Those are my favorite lines in this beautiful poem...:)

[Jack...]

Thank you sincerely

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome... Any time...