To deliver such affection in each stanza was stupendous. Traveling through your words remind me of my first love, and not the sexual type. The first girl I loved with all my heart, I thank god for her allowing me to love her. Lovely words
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thanks so much. I appreciate your kind and flattering words.
I enjoyed this poem as it flows right from the heart through the pen onto paper. When we love someone, we pledge our all to them, and we would gladly give up everything just to be with them. We want to bare ourself totally to them. All those feelings are brought out effortlessly in each line of this poetry.
Thanks for sharing this amazing poem.
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thank you so much for commenting, I appreciate your flattering words and the fact that you took the .. read moreThank you so much for commenting, I appreciate your flattering words and the fact that you took the time to read this rather lengthy poem.
Well now, Jack... You have a gift to write with such softness of love from a man's point of view that women reading have no choice but to longingly read each stanza. This poem just flows with deep emotion. I got a little teared as I felt so much of this that I could relate to. It is a wonderfully soft, joyous look at love - written with great care, talent, and style. Favorite!
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
I am so happy that you could relate to some of this poem, I hope it was in a good way. Thank you so .. read moreI am so happy that you could relate to some of this poem, I hope it was in a good way. Thank you so much for your kind words and reading so much of my work,
I have known this place, and you've captured those endearing whispers of heart-speak in verses that reach into the core of the soul.....Your imagery flows in satin whispers of ache, and the echoes beneath the surface of the words capture the vision of the heart's deepest emotions.....your poem's deep fragrance will linger on .... so amazingly beautiful.....:)
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thank you so much Angel. I got a little long winded in this one, but once I started, I just couldn't.. read moreThank you so much Angel. I got a little long winded in this one, but once I started, I just couldn't stop till it was all out of me.
11 Years Ago
Just as it should be Jack....poetry is the heart's emotional overflow...and this piece portrayed you.. read moreJust as it should be Jack....poetry is the heart's emotional overflow...and this piece portrayed yours beautifully :)
My hands just trembled and my eyes were about to tear, I haven't find it long at all, it made me feel what I feel for real, but can't speak words of poetry as these beautiful ones, so charming, I didn't know which lines to choose as my favorite sir, so its all my favorite, thanks for sharing this great piece.
I enjoyed it all, and this the most I like:
I am but only one person
Doing just what I will do
Being myself in the face of the storm
Sending my love up to you
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thank you so very much. It just came upon me one morning and I could not stop writing once I started.. read moreThank you so very much. It just came upon me one morning and I could not stop writing once I started. I am so happy you enjoyed it.
You always take me on such a journey into love's embrace. Your words flow with such promise and depth of meaning. Again a beautiful write.
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thank you so very much. I know it was long and appreciate you taking the time to read it. I am happy.. read moreThank you so very much. I know it was long and appreciate you taking the time to read it. I am happy it touched you and took you on a wonderful journey. If it brought a smile to your face and the feeling of love to your heart, then I am happy.
your works are well worded it reminds me of an old friend of mine. I used to call Fegger. He too was a great wordsmith. You're definitely different from anyone else I know. This poem while it is beautiful to read. Also has a classic feel to it
Not much to tell about me, I am just Jack, I am a poet, a writer, a musician, a painter, a builder and a dreamer. I live in south Texas but am originally from New Jersey and miss it more and more all .. more..