Dream on

A little poem about dreaming and believing in those dreams

Dream On

By Jack Ivey

 

Our dreams they come in patterns

Of night shade mysteries

In darkened rooms of full lit moons

On braided tapestries

 

Weaving through the questions

Flowing in our minds

Promises of what can be

Behind these shuttered blinds

 

Wondrous forms of fashion

Strange at times can be

Puzzles of a thousand pieces

Bound of destiny

 

Tied within our heart strings

Driving as the rain

Comfort of a precious sort

Enchantment to remain

 

Still we wait this moment

When our thoughts prepare

Scenic traits on different dates

Before our endless stare

 

So dream on fellow wanderer

Take this ship a’ flight

For somewhere true, dreams wait for you

To fall asleep tonight

Author's Note

Please enjoy this poem and let me know what you think.

Reviews

[Levi Levin]

Excellent poetry Jack. I enjoyed it!

[Jack...]

Thank you so much

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Jack, another masterpiece. Your poetry is flawless.......lovely. I am sharing this one. :)

[Jack...]

Thank you Neva, feel free to do with it as you please. We all dream and we all hope our dreams come true.

[Tate Morgan]

now these two quatrains that have the hidden in a rhyme in the third line. I really like that pattern. I've used it myself a few times

Our dreams they come in patterns
Of night shade mysteries
In darkened rooms of full lit moons
On braided tapestries


So dream on fellow wanderer
Takes this ship a’ flight
For somewhere true, dreams wait for you
To fall asleep tonight

[Jack...]

We all like to dream every now and again. Thanks again for you kind comments.