Drink deep from the bottle

Drink deep from the bottle

A Poem by Jack Force

Drink deep from the bottle,

I’ll lose myself in your fantasy.

My drunken sprawl falls onto you.


This sweet dream cracks at the edge,

I think we both looked good once,

But we’ve blurred into reality.

 


I think I’ll be going.

© 2010 Jack Force


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I enjoy your short and sometimes, not so sweet deliveries JF! Sign of a good writer, to be sure. Those two final lines in the second stanza are beautiful!lol

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Tai

Posted 14 Years Ago


Somehow I think there might be more to this than just a case of "beer goggles," but I could be wrong. The "I think I'll be going" seems significant.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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