I’m under construction

I’m under construction,

Could you build me up?

 

Don’t get too attached to this,

I won’t let you last that long.

You can’t touch me forever.

 

I’m up and you’re down.

Thanks for coming round.

Reviews

[Tai Chi Italy]

You can’t touch me forever. Famous last words Jack! You describe the see saw affect of relationships so well. This is why we pick those that pick us up so easily. It's all part of growing up and being loved.

Smiling at you

Tai, a lover of merry ego rounds

[cest la vie]

you say so much in such short pieces.. the mark of a good writer..

[tuesday nobody]

You don't know how often I feel like this. That's just creepy. I would say keep up the good work, but I don't know if the world should be exposed to my emotions so well.

[Anna Kay]

i really really like this. its like your saying that if you help me i will jst bring you down because that happened to me and you will feel ma pain. very well written and i like it! :)

-Anna Kay Patton