To the top of that mountain

To the top of that mountain

A Poem by Jack Force

To the top of that mountain,
Only you can reach.
Take that star for your eye,
And steal it from the sky.

© 2009 Jack Force


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i love this! its really sweet and short. it rhymes and flows really well. did you write this for someone special?

-Anna Kay Patton

Posted 14 Years Ago


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I'm loving it because of the open meaning laid out here. This write will mean different things to different people but for this reader, I see pure and simple modesty....and gallons of it.
For me, this write speaks of one reaching their full potential but then feeling compelled to hide it from the great expanse....whatever that may be.



Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on December 26, 2009
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Jack Force
Jack Force

United Kingdom



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