Best Part of the Day

Oh I feel alone
I should’ve known
It’s like I don’t have anyone
to talk to anymore
My days
I keep searching
For something to make it worth it
And it comes
In the seconds I see you

Reviews

[Lisasview]

Feels like a young person talking in this poem.
Different style of writing with no punctuation
Never the less I got it as I was once young and had the same feeling.
Lisa, now in Spain

[Mr. C]

Knocking on 40 but this was a quick something I put together. I had been developing feelings for someone and then we decided to stop because of our personal situations. I believe the feeling is still there but I guess right now isn't a good time. We went from talking and corresponding all day to nothing at all. I would see her in passing moments and those seconds were the best part of my day.

[William Michael Reeves]

I like this poem. Nice rhythm and rhyme. You've got something to say to somebody. I hope you get the chance to talk to them.