A Special Spring Day

As a child I remember a wonderful Spring day. Similar to this poem

Walking along the river
 ripples dancing gently on the water.
with God alone for company,
I'm blissfully happy.
Warm and perfect is the day.

I lay in a bed of sweet smelling grass.
I'm overcome by

 it's sweet perfume.
I close my eyes,
breathing the magic brew.

 Listening to the birds
 singing to their Maker.

 By the river, I sleep
 dreaming of Earth and Paradise.

In the warm bed of grass, 
I am Home.         

 

Reviews

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

How did I ever miss this delightful piece... the simple beauty of it is like nature, gives me a warm peaceful feeling.

[Hisou_Tenshi]

A truly wonderful write. Sorry that I haven't reviewd it 'til now. Lottsa stuff have been happening. Anyways, I really love this poem. It gave me the most magical view when I read it and I enjoyed that view very much. Thank you.

[EmpressPoetess]

Truly lovely, makes me think of my childhood on the farm.

[Mark]

Truly impressive, Anita! The gentle lilt of the lines flowing effortlessly into one another evokes images of gentle breezes and wafting stems, awaiting only a child's pure heart to esteem them as they deserve!

[Helena]

You have brought back fond memories to me Anita.
I too remember lying on the grass and savouring
the bliss of a spring day. Thank you for bringing
that image back to me! A delightful poem indeed!

Thank you for submitting this to "A Chance To Shine" contest! ~ Helena

[DanaRegen]

This poem is so refreshing, i love the nature in it. This is an amzing poem, great job. Also thanks for sharing, and fantabulous poem.
-Dana

[The Devil's Own B***h]

Wow, this is beautiful. Unfortunately my childhood never allowed for such wonders. That jsut makes it so much more beautiful to read.

Great job! Really made me feel like I was out there on "a special spring day". :)

Josie

[Lady leah]

Very lovely & beautiful write reminds of a summers day.

[Beatrice Boyle (Grandm..]

Lovely and lyrical...just like a spring day.
Nice imaging...I'm relaxed already!

Bea

[Gandré]

pretty and sweet.
but you see: you 've seen magic - by feeling first, then you wrap it into words and bring on paper - for us.