A Small Whisper

My very first poem.

A small whispe tells me

"Time"

 It seems so far away to ease the pain.

I can see you at night.

Waiting.

You tell me

Not Yet!

When work is done

I can join you

In time

Reviews

[Sheila Kline]

Dear Annie!
Time....four alphabet letters and yet it spans eternity! I have read your note that you heard this word whispered after your husband died. It is only time until we shall join our loved ones again! This is a most thought provoking write that instructs me to enjoy what I have before it is gone!
Thank you for making me stop to think!
Blessings!
Sheila

[Winter McPherson]

Short but so poignant! Full of longing. I liked the format too.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Kinda chilling in a way, almost like communicating with the other side with a fallen loved one... short but really powerful.

[Emily B]

this is nice, to know that one day will be the time when you meet again . . . nicely done

[Phenomena]

such a small poem stated so clearly and extremely powerful!!! I am sooo sorry I couldn't review this earlier after you requested it. God Bless=D

[4ammonologues]

Painful, sad. You managed to bring out a lot of emotion in very little words.

[BABSIE BEE]

So emotional and inspiring for those who don,t believe in such likes. I believe with all my heart and love this poem of yours. So thank you for sharing with us.

Babsxxx

[Beatrice Boyle (Grandm..]

Beautifully done Annie...Time is all we have on this earth...how we use it, is what makes our lives worthwhile. The older we get, the more we realize how precious it is...and if we have lost love ones, we looke forward to the day we are reunited forever!

Bea

[Donni]

the different aspects of how time affects our lives. Wonderful piece. Felt the sorrow, the longing. Keep on writing! Donni

[Vaishali..^_^]

wow..!!it's beautiful..!!
and i agree with Sierra,love this poem seems to have feeling of sadness in it..!!
great write..!!

[Cherry Berry]

This was beautifully penned, and full of longing and desire. Well penned. I enjoyed reading this piece.
xox
Cherri