Conscious Love

I finally wake,
I feel your hand shake,
as you touch my face,
you cry as I stare into space,
you say that your sorry,
you say it was wrong,
I say its okay,
as you try to say,
Ive gotten some help,
Im on some medication,
please say youll stay,
please say well be okay,
I pull you close and kiss your lips,
and make it so I dont lose my grip,
the doctor walks in,
and as he moves in,
he says that you must leave,
and thats when I start to plead,
he says it is for best,
I start to scream and hold onto your chest,
he calls in the guard,
who takes you away,
the doctor sustains me,
as he asks,
why? Why do you want him in here hes the one who put you here?
I scream louder,
I cry more,
the place goes silent,
Im sitting alone,
I start to be scared,
just as Im wondering,
do they believe in forgiveness?,
The silence goes cold,
the light goes dark,
in a blink of an eye,
Im on the bed screaming again,
the sun is back,
and the people are there,
my lover is no longer standing,
for now he lies on the floor,
he put up the fight,
he wanted to save me,
instead of doing so he lands on the floor,
bleeding from his head,
he was trying to make it right,
what happens when you try to pay back your debt?,
It still pays you a vengeful visit,
I know that he love me,
I know that he was sorry,
I just hope that he knows,
that while he was hitting me,
while he was carving my heart out,

Reviews

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I hate it when the steak knife of life digs into the heart... So sad..*Sniffs* i do so hope that all has worked out and sharp edges are no longer prevalent in this swirl of two peoples lives. Happiness is always better than pain I say. *Giggles*

I thought the poem itself flowed smooth and certainly shouted the images to the reader in a visual and emotional manner. Great ink!

*Big hugs!* - Tara

[Blade & Blood (The ..]

This sounds like a bad case of domestic violence. There's a lot of truth here, though; it's an endless loop when you fight, bleed, forgive, and repeat. Nice work.

Ironically Yours, Blade 3 Blood

[DarkAngelWriter]

Wow... nothing much else to say. Excellent.