Unconscious Love

Last night,
we had to fight,
about our life,
I cant believe,
what I see,
you, trying to control me,
I wont deal with that,
because you hit me with a bat,
Why? Why would you do that?,
I thought you loved me,
I thought you cared for me,
but I guess that was a lie,
I guess you wanna be the cause of my last sigh,
Ive pushed my friends away,
because I thought youd stay,
I didnt care,
that I wasnt fair,
I am alone,
and I cant go home,
when I see you,
my heart jumps,
I love you,
and thats when I knew,
that I have to leave you,
I know you want to be happy,
and I dont mean to sound sappy,
but you need to know,
that I have to go,
while Im gone,
go get help,
Ill be back on my next dawn.

Reviews

[Blade & Blood (The ..]

Whoops; probably should've read this before the Conscious Love. Well, I'll treat it like a prequel instead of the "first chapter". ;)

This piece, individual from Conscious Love, gives the reader a surreal account of what the victim (?) is going through mentally. This type of theme isn't quite uncommon, but it is entertaining telling nonetheless.

Ironically Yours, Blade 3 Blood

[DarkAngelWriter]

This sounds like maybe the first poem to the other of yours... where you're in the hospital. They could be companion pieces.