Wishing you were here

Wishing you were here

A Poem by Jared

I'm looking to the ocean,

To find out where you've gone,

I'm looking to the sky,

Waiting on dawn,

When I look strait ahead,

I'm looking at the bed,

The bed we slept in,

The bed we shared when you were here,

Now I close my eyes,

and picture your head,

lying down on my chest,

I remember our times together,

I remember how you made me feel,

Now that that time is gone,

I'm wishing you were here.

© 2008 Jared


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Awwwwies...

Posted 16 Years Ago


Beautifully written
Has a great flow and it reminds
me of one of the poems i have written,
but i havnt posted it yet.
Thanks for sharing
and keep on the writing


Posted 16 Years Ago



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