You make me your everything

You make me your everything

A Poem by Jared

Every night I close my eyes,

You rub my hair,

And you tell me you'll always be there

 

Since the day we met

You've made my life

Something I don't regret,

 

You make me your everything,

and now to you this song I sing,

You've never let me go

Even when I'm feeling low

 

You help through my hard times

you'd give up a catrillion dimes

before you make me

walk alone in this world feeling so empty

 

You make me your everything

Even when you've got more important things

You drop it all

even the law

Just to make sure I'm okay

© 2008 Jared


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That's sweet. =]
Catrillion, lol.

Posted 16 Years Ago


This is a sweet poem. It dawned on me a few minutes that I've never read anything outside of your "Redeeming a Chance"; I'm glad I decided to 'navigate' because this is a nice and cute poem. Although I cannot relate to those types of feelings (at least, not romantically), I'm sure many others can relate to it, and that's the best part about this piece. :)

It's a beautiful piece. Glad I read it. ^^

Ironically Yours, Blade and Blood

Posted 16 Years Ago


Is this the old one? If so, you're full of s**t, cause I love it.
Told you I would!

Posted 16 Years Ago


Great poem
it reminds me of how i feel
towards the person i really care about
right now.
Hope to read some more of your work
Best wishes


Posted 16 Years Ago



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