That lonley feeling

That lonley feeling

A Poem by Jared
"

its sappy but i like it

"

I sit at home and I wait....

I wait for someone to come and get me

I wait for my life to begin to get fun

I wait for my heart to feel complete

I also wait for the end

I wait for the end of that lonly feeling

I wait for a person to fill the empty

I wait for the day i can see the glass half full

instead of half empty

That's all I do....

Is Wait...

To end...

That Lonly Feeling

© 2008 Jared


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Jared
let me know what you think... honestly

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lol It's not sappy. I like it too. It really sounds as if you were really pondering about life and, possibly, love. Thanks for posting this. :)

Ironically Yours, Blade and Blood

Posted 16 Years Ago


I think that you speak the truth of it. The endless waiting for someone special and different to see through the body of our life and see the true essence and love with in.
I can relate! ;)

It's a confusing thing that we deal with, this thing called life. One moment it makes perfect sense then as we turn the corner and try to retrace our steps, we can't find where we came from. Forcing us to keep walking on into the future.

Thanks for sharing Jared. It's honest and that's the best quality there is out there!

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on February 17, 2008

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