What If?

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What If?

 

If I cried would you care?
Would you be with me, holding me tight
Telling me that these tears aren't worth it
Its not worth the fight..

If I was to lose everything I had
Would you stay with me or would you go?
Would you hold hope?
Or is it that you have none to show?

If I died, would you be there?
By my side,
with tears dropping over my still silhouette
Or will you be the one, with nothing to regret?

Author's Note

What if?

Reviews

[Mpotavin]

you who? Is the you in the general or specific? Is it me, or any reader, someone specific? In other words, please provide more context. Seems more like song lyrics then a poem, as you only use vagueries. Include some sensory data. Also see if you can write this without using questions. Unanswered questions are bad, as they generally are used to create the illusion of depth without actually going there. Unless you're talking to the big G, then you really can't expect a response. Hope this helps, good luck with the rewrite.

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

Your writing style is somewhat like my own at times. I like it. Makes you think. Thank you for sharing. Debileah

[BLFK]

It's beautiful. I really enjoyed it. I love your style. Short, simple, but stopped me, caught me, and held me in till the ending. Beautiful.

[Tony]

What if couples asked each other good questions like this........before they procreate.
Wouldn't that be a good idea?
What if you put another one on [Just] Justin?
This is a good poem, I like it.

[Sexy Jones]

I really like this.
The words are simple but they hold so much meaning.

Great write.