cortsey - vaishnav jan to tene kahiye ji ( by bhakt narsi mehta ) . This is not my poem so please dont credit me, this is the translated version of the courtsied hindi poem . I wanted to share it with you all to make you feel the greatness of this literary work ... so i have posted it here ...
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I have heard the original bhajan (it IS a bhajan, I guess) and it full of soul. Now I read this translation of yours and I think, you brought out the spirit of the original into your work as well. The use of font and the over-all wordplay was excellent. Loved it. Keep it up! :)
And I am glad you shared it :) Beautiful and thought provoking..
xoxo
Posted 13 Years Ago
It's wonderful to find something, then work on it to be shared with the world so that the world will be moved by such inspiring works also.
This is definitely a piece of poetry which I can say is better for the eyes and both the mind. Not only does it come with the luxury of smooth style changes in font, but it also comes with the good morals which one should find themselves taking contemplation on. It's an excellent piece. Wonderful indeed.
Also, nice image choice, this is definitely Ghandi-like stuff, although Ghandi's life was more political motivated, but back with pure intentions and a calm mending hand towards humanity such as what's represented within this poem's messages on how man should be.
This is a very inspiring work. Thank you for sharing. You can feel the power in the words that you have written down. Meaning, within the different fonts of the puter generation, you are able to place a great deal more umph to the transcription you have done. (I think that came out right) Sorry, sometimes I am just at a loss for words or wording well, and this would be one of those times. Thank you for sharing this with us. :)