U needa Know

I want that you should be aware of what i feel about you .. my love ..

You needa know

how much I love you

You needa know

how much I miss you

I just cant tell you ohh baby

you drive my soul so goddamn crazy

every thought of you 

makes me want to feel you forever

I just can't resist this feeling

as it is driving me thrilling

You needa know

you my love is my heaven

You needa know

with you my love starts my crescent

This is just getting messier

I am starving for you so nastier

I want you all my life

Ohh baby you are my enigmatic soul

Ohh baby you are my breaking dawn

This is for true I love you

You needa know 

I want to be your moon not the sun

You needa know

I have devoted this life of mine to shine yours

Baby whenever you are not here

It feels like so unreal

I bet the world for sure

you are my angelic cheer

and whenever the doom comes

I will be with you there

You needa know

how much I love you

You needa know

how much I miss you

Reviews

[Amila Jay]

Great write:)

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

Hmmm, I get the write and find it intriguing as well as enjoyable. But I didnt understand the reason behind having to write "need to" as "needa"... other wise its a very loving piece almost lyrical. Nicely done.

[Writingfox]

Hmmm interesting. I really empathized with the beginning. Sometimes a certain person can drive you absolutely insane! The middle got a bit carnal but only for a blink which was surprising. I liked the sweet, sad ending.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

I agree with "paparapapa"... lol!... :) Very sweet and "Extra whipped"... cream, that is. ;) I love how honest and raw the emotions are conveyed in this piece. Nicely done!

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem flowed like good music. I like the repetition making the poem purpose come out strong. Missing someone leave us sad and wishing for a reunion. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[~Sarah~ Idríel T..]

WOW I LOVE THIS!!! Soo touching, longing and full of L.O.V.E!!!

Awesome job! I put this to my faves 4 sure. :)

This really hits straight into my heart cause I know those feelings, I've been there and still I am.

Love,
Sarah

I'll give 100/100

A good romantic poem that reads like a monologue to a dear lover.
The poem describes to the reader a person who is dear to the narrator in love giving the speech, it also describes how much they mean to the narrator, and their impact with their absence.
To do this all in a first person perspective is true to the romantic genre... definitely have enjoyed reading it. It gives off a warming pleasurable atmosphere to the audience evoking their understandings of the concept of trust, care, and devotion to another person.
some constructive criticism though: in some lines, you have one extra word that'll knock off the rhythmic beat a bit. (feel free to message me if you either need help finding them) sometimes errors like this are overlooked during free-thinking a poem, aka writing off the top of your head and running with it... I do this alot :p I would imagine it's a common thing, but anyways, rereading the poem with a steady pace should highlight them.
Overall: 94/100 is a good score I think... I enjoyed it ^_^ and good work mate, and keep it up

[Dove]

Love the flow. Its really beautiful and I enjoyed readinf this loevely piece. Keep up the amazing work.

[Rakesh Roushan]

Yeah!!! I have written a song ... I just wanted to share it with you in the form of poetry

[MetBySunlight]

Ohh I like this! Very cute!