The angelic Cheer

The smile of the lady is driving me crazy.. so i just tempted it out in sort of a poem

Her smile so bright

so reviveful

her laugh the ultimate

cure of every pain

She the only one

the girl the angel

who has lighten up

my life once again

She so lovely

so admirable so beautiful

eyes glued to her beauty

ears lend to her words

my heart is already hers

even my mind has also

became a part of hers

She my dream

my grace my desire

is just.................

Author's Note

I was wordless to fill up the last word.. every beautiful words in the world seemed nothing to that feeling of mine

Reviews

[Manpreet]

Beautiful poem!

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This is so wonderful and ever so sweet, yo ought to enter my contest I am having. This is sweet and lovely.

[Misty_Prophet]

It's so sweet and I just like it... I agree that there is no need to fill in the blank. It really shows us that you are left speechless and breathless by her beauty

[Alex Miller<3]

The end of it leaves the reader with this sort of feeling of curiosity as if the beauty leaves you speechless...Great job

[Dahlia Phoenix]

There's no need to fill that last part with a word. What you feel is what you feel and words can't express that. A soft poem relishing the feelings toward another. Lovely poem.