frustration

it feels like but if it is ... just a new poem from my heart under ongoing depression

IT FEELS LIKE BUT IF IT..

just two answers i want from thee

what heck is life and worth living in it..

its sort of fun or fare or bizarre

or it the calmness or the soul

that i want to understand 

help me thee finding these

for me they are surreal peas

it feels like weeks and it feels like years

but its neither weeks nor years

its like the feeling of getting in something

but again the same disappointment of loosing everything

the feeling so intense so powerful

makes me feel quite dreadful 

it feels like achieving the zenith

like marring the hell out of a warrior

it feels like all thing i want to achieve

what i am craving for and what i preach

it feels like total and it feels like still nothing

it feels like in motion but still it is still

the feel of feeling these ravage me

for the quick hour desolate me

i want to break free free from these

where i can live reckless free

help me o god to turn these

and let me be me the only me ..

Reviews

[Dahlia Phoenix]

A good read. You express what you feel in this poem and it doesn't matter in what form you place it, words speak for themselves. Depression is a powerful emotion that causes us to create mistakes but if we fight against it, happiness will come your way again.

[Rakesh Roushan]

I wrote surreal peas as symbolism to describe that its really turning hard for me to find happiness in life as like when you dont know the right way of opening the pods to get peas from them, they can get crushed if you press too hard or you may find it difficult to open the pods good so i used that here .. I hope now its clear to you

[MetBySunlight]

This is quite cool, I enjoyed reading it.
One question though, what do you mean by 'surreal peas'? Without knowing the meaning, it sounds like a forced rhyme.

[Writingfox]

Well said. Ecstasy and Agony. Both and None. I love this piece:)