Just F*****g Don't

Please don't look at me

with that superior look 

upon your face

the same face that I have the strong urge

to place a pillow over

just f*****g don't

don't lecture me

with that monotone voice

the same voice

that makes me want to

slam my fist into your throat

just f*****g don't

don't grab me

with that hand

that makes me feel

like a bad six year old

Just

F*****g 

Don't

Author's Note

Okay, this is not for anyone's benefit, if you like it, fine. Thank you for the review. But if you don't, there is no need to place a review, just stating that you don't like it. Thank you.

Reviews

[Julius Whimbird]

Hmm, this piece has an interesting concept, but I feel like some of the lines don't work. "Upon your face/The same face that I have the strong urge/To place a pillow over." You kind of lost me with "to place a pillow over." That line just threw off the emotion and made it sound more comedic. Now, for the rest of the poem, I just believe some of the phrases could've been worded differently to make it flow smoother. This was a good poem and I hope to see more entries.

[CRAIG A. THOMSON]

I think it's great! Not necessarily as a piece of literary genius, But I love the reaction it has created amongst the reviewers! I like that! Don't stop doing it...'Just f*****g don't!' OK?

[silver threaded queen]

Lol... thank you and alot of the reviews were correct... it was more of a dry sarcasm filled poem to vent....

[CRAIG A. THOMSON]

Chack out 'Search for the sunlight' by me, C. A Thomson.
It's only a first draft, but you might like it? Hope so. x

[Dr. S. D. Blankenship D..]

Hm--

I will have to re-read this to fully understand it. (but, it's not because of the way it is written, it's because my brain cannot fully understand this.)
But, it seems to be good. :)

~S. D. Blankenship

[Victoria Elizabeth]

wow it sums up alot! That how i feel toward people at our school great job

[The Girl with the smile]

Lots of raw emotions, it makes this poem great! Nice job! Also, I love the title.