Angel Tears [song version]

Why do you look at me

with such hate

written ever so clearly

upon your angel like face

 

angels forgive me for my past

I can't erase the future

wouldn't if I could

 

I loved you with a passion

that would move heavan and hell

 

chorus

and so the angels are crying and crying

and yet their tears burn me

 

I felt so singled out

left all alone

in a world that didn't understand my motives

 

chorus

and the angels are crying and crying

and yet their tears burn me

 

and so they cry, they cry

sobs racking their fragile bodies

 

and I stand below

feeling more alone

than I have in my entire life

Author's Note

well i did say i was going to turn this into a song, sorry it took so long, my computer was down..... and i was just to lazy to put it up. Please tell me what you guys think!!!

Reviews

[Marianne]

This is really good. I especially like the first few lines. Good job

[Hatchling]

great piece.

[mystic]

this is a great piece, and i totally understand the way you wrote it. its great

[fatalsymphonies]

This is melodious. "And I stand below, feeling more alone, than i have in my entire life". Oh man, I understand, i feel ya