Wondering

sun shiney days

 

just go on by

 

like the sun setting fire

 

to the deep blue sky

 

the world keeps on turning

 

the days just go by

 

I sit all alone

 

with no one or nothing

 

this is how it started

 

and this is how it will end

 

you gaze into the room

 

so neatly set up

 

the table has a red cloth draped over it

 

dozens of multi-colored blankets drape the bed

 

a bottle of wine

 

and a bottle pills beside it

 

you set a envelope beside the wine

 

wondering who will find you

 

 

Reviews

[Ruth]

I feel this so much, a powerful piece love! We all have shards of moments where we can relate to this! Moving and hard hitting xx

[fatalsymphonies]

I think everyone sits and wonders to themselves sometimes, it makes sense to me, much, too much. I really like the sense of aloneness.

[Mazery]

I really like the way you structured this poem, the way it steadily steeps into its sad message. I even started singing this aloud as I read it. It's very well put together and flowing and the message of it all is quite clear and prominent. Well done!