it fades

my hate 

burns hotter than the pits of hell

and yet you laugh at it

my love

has the power to make the angels jealous

and you wave it away

at first I am like a new toy to you

then like old photos

it fades

your so called love

your deep interest for me

all gone like the memories made by the photos

it'll all fade

eventually

 

Reviews

[Alicia Schroeder]

What a powerful peice. Great job

[Tina Kline]

Very strong and powerful emotions behind this, the hate and anger. I think you did a wonderful job.

[InkSlinger]

Yeah, I liked this too.. you get a sense of anger throughout it.. but more then just an anger.. more like a bitterness.. venomous...

[Misty Blue Eyes]

i like this, i can feel the anger and hate behind this