fallen part 2

the single rose

lays at your feet

waiting

you pick it up

but your thumb grazes the thorn

you gasp

thinking of forgotten Aurora

the red drop hits the rose

it morphs

into Him

the one

with curly black hair, and eyes

and eyebrows that slant up in the middle

reminding you of the devil 

he smiles

for he is back in this godforsaken place

and he knows that means

she is now fallen

he smiles

and gives her his hand 

Reviews

[Victoria Elizabeth]

Very good, again, Jennie, this is what I like to read

[Tina Kline]

Impressive, very dark and ominous, can just see the Devil smiling, thinking he's about to get his way.

[Misty Blue Eyes]

wow i love this.. very nice