still loving you

know when I'm gone

that I need you to be strong

that I'm just a hairsbreadth away 

know that all you need to do is call

and my presence will surround you

warm and welcoming you bring it in

I am sorry that I cannot be there

when you need me the most

know I am watching far above you

still loving you  

Reviews

[Tina Kline]

These are comforting words said to someone who they can't be with but will be there for them if they are needed even though it seems at the end that they're watching them from above which could mean they are watching from Heaven. I really like this poem, I think you did a wonderful job on it.

[silver threaded queen]

I really just don't know what this is. It was fun to write though.