meek

"worthless,"my mother sneered at me

"yes I am,"was my meek response

does this sound familiar   

does it touch the back of your brain

can you remember tears because of this

because I can

the hate

it twists 

and turns

were lucifer burns

leaving me

crumpled

and so empty

at her mercy 

   

Author's Note

sorry 'bout' the earlier post my page went down and automatically saved before I could finish this is all I have so far, your reviews help good and bad.

Reviews

[Brittany W]

oh so relatable, nice work here, i think you should expand this.

[Ruth]

This is powerful and sad :(
Sometimes people take words to heart, such a melancholy state to be in! Wonderful work
xx