Angel Tears

sad, singled out, left all alone the angels are cruel

why do you look at me

with such hate

written ever so clearly

upon your angel like face

angels forgive me for my past tense

I can't erase the future

wouldn't if I could

I loved you with a passion 

that would move heaven and hell

and so the angels are crying, crying

and yet their tears burn me

I felt so singled out

left all alone

in a world that doesn't understand my motives

and so the angels cry, they cry

sobs racking their fragile bodies

and I stand below 

feeling more alone

than I have in my entire life 

 

  

Author's Note

I hope you like it, truly I do.

Reviews

[Steven Cash]

I really do like it

Truly :))

[Sami Geiger]

I love this it's such a great poem! (:

[That_Girl]

"that would would move heaven and hell" would is repeated.. :)

I like this a lot. Your sorrows are clearly expressed in a mature fashion. Well done!

[silver threaded queen]

thank you!!! I never noticed that... thanks for the info!

[silver threaded queen]

I am working on turning this into a song, I turn the angels are crying,crying into repeating verse, same for and so the angels cry they cry, and I have to add on to it, but when I finish the song I will post it for you guys.thanks:D

[Ruth]

I love this, as a spoken word poem it would work really well love, a lot of emotion, it would drive it so well xx

[Ruth]

It is hard when we feel like this, such ethereal beings would indeed be a blessing to hear from!
Instead, we feel more distant than ever!
I understand the emotions here, beautifully written love!
xx

[...]

i know that feeling of solitude
and your words paint pain beautifully
it's tough to fly to a higher altitude
but you accomplish that so gracefully

. beautiful writing, jenny ... such magical simplicity ... so moving ... so gentle ... and so exquisite ... i can tell how much the angels must love you ... they love angelic humans ...