Why

why do you do this to me

your words lull me to sleep

   

I have never heard such a haunting lullaby

 

it's just enough to awaken me

 

why are these words forgotten 

the second they leave my lips

as if my beauty blinds my evils

you put me up on a pedestal

I'm bound to come tumbling down

then you leave me

sobbing on the ground

my head tightly clenched between my two fists

groaning why, why, why

moaning why, why, why

thinking of you

 

Author's Note

just a beginning copy enjoy

Reviews

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A gliding piece thats a joy to read.

[Ruth]

A potent poem love, one that allows the reader to hear your thoughts, exorcised heart on page! lol
Awesome!
Direct and meaningful :)
xx

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. oh, brilliant! ... my god your writing is precise ... and that precise feeling that you speak of ... i couldn't in a million lives ... awe-struck by your skill and your sensitivity ... exquisite writing ... i so agree with starcrossed ...

[Roberta]

Wow, I can see how much raw emotion you have put in to this, it's amazing. I think you have some real talent !