You Win

tears make slow paths

down your cheeks

on your knee's

hold on tight

count to three

just stay with me

slowly you put your hands up

with the gun tightly grasped

tears drip off

you have no choice

you pull the trigger

he falls

towards you 

slowly drifting 

falling to the ground

you drop it

and land on top of him

he grasps on to you for dear life

in out in out he breaths

then stops

you win

 

Reviews

[...]

. oh, that's mind numbing and soul scorching beyond measure ... you are the queen of brevity and powerful expression ... and this scene comes to life so beautifully that it's almost cinematic ... brilliant and sheer genius ...

[Roberta]

Wow, this is so full of emotion, words cannot describe how it makes me feel