fairy tale

none really I don't like to describe because so many people have so many opions so I let them think their own way

Dreams are like a fairy tale

 

People say they are for the weak

 

But they are strong, beautiful

 

Breaking the rules or reality

 

Poverty is like a fairy tale

 

People say that it is not real

 

But it is

 

Like the tidal wave she moves

 

Changing peoples lifes

 

Frightening them

 

Hurting them

 

But she is a force of nature

 

She cannot help what she does

 

Like a lightning storm she dances

 

Painting the skys bright colors

 

Painting peoples lifes bright colors

 

Eys like the sky

 

Deep yet see through

 

She is a fairy tale

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

I might add on to this or take away.Whatever

Reviews

[marisa starkilicious]

I really like how this poem progresses. From a fairytale to a tidal wave (which is a minor spelling error in there). Some parts seem a little off, and I would suggest you add more, but otherwise this is good. I like the fact that you didn't use a rhyme scheme, and instead chose free verse. I also like the repitition where you put it.

Good job. :)