Broken

Just another face

lost in the crowd 

just a broken voice

in which the silence is loud

just a broken heart

drowning in broken dreams

deep in the woods

of broken promises

so do tell

at what point

is it deemed

"in-fixable"

"irreparable"

or just plain broken 

Reviews

[KAOlmsted]

This is really quite good. Thank you so much for sharing this with us.

[Chris]

this one paused me... you spoke well.

[P.S.Chance]

I like this a lot! And I've had the very same thought. And the question at the end? I don't think any person is irrepairable - I think they just need the right medicine.

[John Phoenix Hutchinson..]

A questioning piece this and highly enjoyable.

[silver threaded queen]

thank you :)

[alice]

The great part about broken things: feelings dreams and promises. You can discard the rubbish and start anew.

[silver threaded queen]

thanks bunches for the awesome feedback!!!

[Steven Cash]

Very nice job, Jenny

[Ruth]

Hard to know at what point such happens isn't it?
This is brimming with suffocating questioning...
Yet perhaps unanswerable...
Great work
xoxo

[silver threaded queen]

Thank you Poppy, I swear, you are the best!!

[Ruth]

♥ Welcome hon xo