On The Brink Of Fate

Have you ever gotten that feeling?
When clouds tinge the sky
A crackling in the air
A sudden urge to fly
Something that surrounds us
As the rain starts to fall
An eternity could pass,
And you wouldn’t notice at all
Like something’s about to happen
And all we can do is wait
Air weighed by trepidation
On the brink of fate

Reviews

[CBH]

The flow for this piece is really nice, the rhyme scheme just makes it flow right off the tongue. It leaves me wondering, what exactly is that feeling? Is being on the brink of fate different for different people, like if you know a big decision is coming up in your life but you feel pressured to choose something, or do not have the ability to choose? It's a great concept, and a nice quick read to get the mind cranking.