Goodbye

I want to fade away
I want to run and hide
I have no words to tell you
What I feel inside
I wish I hadn’t done it
I wish I hadn’t made you cry
I’m sorry, but it’s over
Now I have to say “Goodbye”

Reviews

[TLK]

I am intrigued by this poem, as I almost get the feeling that this speaker is saying this after they have already been left by the person they are addressing. I imagine them, looking only at a memory of the person they've hurt, saying goodbye in order to feel that they are making a positive and useful decision, even though it is not useful.

[Megan Simpson]

This one might be my very favorite out of all of them. It's short and to the point.

[Pi Cee]

Sometimes it's better to leave than to lead on in a direction that takes everybody down a road that just causes even more hurt and tears. Nice piece.

[EvilIsRelative]

Thank you.