In My Hand

Something a little different

 

I hold in my hand

These ambitions, dreams, and longings.

As I give them to you my heart breaks,

I have nothing more.

Nothing more to hold onto, let go of, or roll over and over.

 

This is what it means to give you my all.

I have nothing left.

 

In the midst of nothing I have found myself.

Myself in you.

 

I lie against you and feel my heart beat.

I look into your eyes and see my soul.

 

I pray to you and you answer my call.

 

I hold in my hand

Everything.

Reviews

[Anthony Morningstar]

This is so cool. It's so non-specific. But at the sametime it draws on things that most people can relate to.

[Celtic Cat]

this is beautiful. It touched me in numerous ways on different levels. Happy ending was quite unexpected by gratefully taken in. Kudos.

[Pakino]

This poem can be understood as both a love story and as a way for people to understand that they hold the power do to anything. Really neat poem.