the black flower

if a seed is planted in the dirt that never sees the suns rays but still brakes through it's 

first barrier to life, find lifeless, desolation and an absence of the nutrition needed too grow 

as good as possible ,

as strong as possible 

as fast as possible.

surely this flower would grow bent twisted and ugly 

Reviews

[izico]

thanks for the review but this was in a story i wrote but didn't fit so just put it out there

[1Disawsum]

this was ok, but put it in a poem structure please! It was a little confusing but nonetheless, a great effort! Glad you tried. Keep going! :D welcome to WritersCafe!!!