You're a douchebag.

You're a theift.

You've stolen my heart.

 

You're a robber.

You've robed me of my breath.

 

You're a...liar?

You've told me who you realy are now.

 

You're a heartbreaker.

You've played me well.

 

You're a deadman.

You've been added to my hitlist.

 

You're a hater.

You've made me stronger.

 

So thank you for that great life experiance. Have a nice life with out me.......a*****e

Author's Note

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Reviews

You've spelled you're incorrectly.

It's spelled you're ( the contraction) as in "you are."
not your (the possessive) as in "your shirt."

experience is also spelled incorrectly.
as well as thief, and dead man should either be hyphenated, or two separate words.


Despite these things, the poem isn't terrible. I would advise you however, to try in the future to avoid letting your poem become a rant.