you still dont get it

id climb to the sky and tear down the stars just to be in your arms

id kill and lie to save you from trouble

id cancel any plans just to hang and do nothing with you

but you still dont get that i love you

 

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

Wow that was so lovely my friend ,How I love what you said
Honestly i did that once ,I did everything for her eyes but again ,i got nothing..nothing at all
I d climb the sky Tear down the stars,make all the mess it takes just to be in your arms
I would kill and lie,Commit every sin cross all boundaries,just to save you from troubles
I d cancel all my plans,that I made to live a good life,quit everything just to hang by your side
But I know you still and will never love me,Even though I am ready to be that crazy
Oh lovely write..

[Papercuts.Hate.You.Too]

Thanks peoplez:)
Love Brooke Madison

[Ashbug:)]

That was amazing, so much said in so little words, i like poems like that. Great job!

[deleted]

Wow! Unnoticed love...very original and beautifully written poem! Good job!