Longing

Longing

A Poem by Bela
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A poem about feeling homesick for Poland, a country I haven't seen since I was a little girl.

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I do not remember you well

But I miss you.

I resided within you

You gave me breath

You gave me nourishment

You were abound with beauty

And then I left you.

© 2015 Bela


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You described Longing very well in your poem. Must be a very beautiful country.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Homesickness is hard and I can feel it in your words. Bravo.......

Posted 9 Years Ago


Powerful journey in and out of love. Love take us to the mountain tops and can toss-us to the loneliness of the dark valley. I liked this poem a lot. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on February 25, 2015
Last Updated on February 25, 2015
Tags: homesick, nostalgia

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Bela
Bela

Sydney, New South Wales, Australia



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Been writing poems on and off since I was 11 or 12. Dabbling a bit, many should never see the light of day, but in the past couple of years my poems are a little better. 99% of the time I do not feel.. more..

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