Fun Love

Fun Love

A Poem by Bela

You’re probably right I’m just not ready, But i do believe I could love more Than love I have for you. Its too painful to stay Just to live in the grey, Neither here or there. Our fun love Is not enough, For I want to Throw myself all in And never have to leave.

© 2013 Bela


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Very nice use of words.
"Just to live in the grey,
Neither here or there."
The grey area of love. A tempting and dangerous place. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Bela
Bela

Sydney, New South Wales, Australia



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Been writing poems on and off since I was 11 or 12. Dabbling a bit, many should never see the light of day, but in the past couple of years my poems are a little better. 99% of the time I do not feel.. more..

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A Poem by Bela