little girl

up and away she goes

full of rage and control

as she screams to get her way full of insults

they must pay

 

all alone in her room no one

stood to hear it through

 

as she cries late at night i

slam the door there

goodnight

Author's Note

i was under the name under ur skin but i cant log on

Reviews

[cest la vie]

Nicely done. Short, but very direct, to the point. keep up the good work!!

[Bill Grimes Jr.]

I love your style my friend........You make every word stand on it's own accord.......well done indeed....

Peace,
Bill :-)

[hannah]

Short poem but a good start. You could have expanded the idea more but still, well done. From what I understood from your poem, not everybody can see the real us or understand us. Which is true. Nice imagery and good use of words.

- Hannah